0342: Wild At Heart Chapters 65-71

Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Title: Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Author: Lone-wolf-fanfics

Topic: Avatar: The Last Airbender

Genre: Hurt/Comfort (emphasis on hurt)

Critiqued by: Linstar

Hello all. I’m Linstar, and I’ve calmed down. I’m alone this week, and we’ve only got two more to go, so… thanks for small mercies. Anyway, last time Death Kermit and Zuko ended the naturebender village arc abruptly so they could go off and regurgitate some more. The counters and bingo board:

Sunrise Scene Change: 4

Be Original!: 47

Get… to… the… point!: 247

Sentenced. To. Death: 378

Chapter Sixty-Five                           

The sun is setting 

Yeah, I’m counting it.

Sunrise Scene Change: 5

0338: Wild At Heart (Zuko) Chapters 57-64

Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Title: Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Author: Lone-wolf-fanfics

Topic: Avatar: The Last Airbender

Genre: Hurt/Comfort (emphasis on hurt)

Critiqued by: Linstar, Mina Overpower

Hey everybody, and welcome back to Wild at Heart. I’m Linstar, and with me is Mina Overpower.

Mina: You told me there were a bunch of other characters named Mina on this site in your badfics. I’m allowed to beat them up, right?

Erm… no?

*Mina pouts.*

Anyway, last time we finished regurgitating the Season Two finale, and Death Kermit and Zuko wandered around in the woods before bumping into a village full of treehugger Sues. 

Mina: Don’t worry, Carlisle told me all about this fic!

Lucky you. Anyway, I’m hoping the author can pull off an original ATLA episode today. Our counters and bingo board are thusly:

Be Original!: 42

Get… to… the… point!: 197

Sentenced. To. Death: 361

0333: Wild at Heart (Zuko): Chapters 48-56

Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Title: Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Author: Lone-wolf-fanfics

Topic: Avatar: The Last Airbender

Genre: Hurt/Comfort (emphasis on hurt)

Critiqued by: Linstar 

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Hi everyone, and welcome back to Wild at Heart. I’m Linstar, and we’re like 70% done with this mess!

…unless there’s a version on Ff.net with an extra 30 chapters. I really hope that’s not the case.

In any event, out counters and bingo board stand thusly:

Be Original!: 33

Get… to… the… point!: 161

Sentenced. To. Death: 330

Last time, Death Kermit wandered around, stole some canon scenes, and inevitably reunited with Zuko. Now, we’re making our way through this fic’s take on the Season Two finale, Crossroads of Destiny.

0328: Wild At Heart Chapters 41-47

Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Title: Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Author: Lone-wolf-fanfics

Topic: Avatar: The Last Airbender

Genre: Hurt/Comfort (emphasis on hurt)

Critiqued by: Linstar 

Hi, hello, greetings, ciao, salut, and welcome back to the Asylum! Don’t mind the DRD, and do please take care to not mind them, because we’re once again covering Wild at Heart! Last time, Death Kermit angsted about her racebending and ran away, only to regurgitate her way into more Cute Animal Friends. The counters are thusly, and the bingo board still stands:

Sentenced. To. Death: 270

Be Original!: 26

Get… to… the… point!: 144

Chapter Forty-One                                             

A/N – I know that this isn’t the way the show and the timeline play out, 

This is fanfiction! Please, for the love of Those Gods, don’t assume you are obligated to follow the events of canon to a T. All I ask is for well-written original content.

but I like the idea of Kali getting more involved with Appa because of her abilities. 

The chances of this being well-written original content are low.

Plus it is a good way to show how far she’s coming with who she is and stuff in the time that she’s been away from Zuko and Iroh.

Ah, so we’re attempting character development. We’ll see how well this goes.

0323: Wild at Heart Chapters 35-40

Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Title: Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Author: Lone-wolf-fanfics

Topic: Avatar: The Last Airbender

Genre: Hurt/Comfort (emphasis on hurt)

Critiqued by: Linstar and Cliff the Tailor

Hello everyone, and welcome to the Asylum! I’m Linstar, and today we’re tackling–

An older man, wearing brightly colored, presumably fashionable clothes: A travesty against all good fashion sense.

Yes, that, Cliff. But more specifically, a badfic known as Wild At Heart, which–

Cliff: *sniffs* How should I know that?

You literally wouldn’t let me finish my sentence. If you’ll just let me explain–

Cliff: Why should I?

STOP INTERRUPTING ME!

Cliff: Fine. As you like it.

Jeesh. Anyway, the counters and bingo board are thusly:

Get… to… the… point!: 122

Sentenced. To. Death: 214

Be Original!: 24

Oh, and we found a picture of Death Kermit:

And one more thing: the fic just updated. 

*inhale*

*Cliff offers Ls a Pillow of Screams.*

0314: Wild At Heart (Shut Up!) Chapters Thirty, Thirty-One, Thirty-Two, Thirty-Three, and Thirty-Four (Wattpad numbering)

Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Title: Wild At Heart (Zuko) 

Author: Lone-wolf-fanfics

Topic: Avatar: The Last Airbender

Genre: Hurt/Comfort (emphasis on hurt)

Critiqued by Linstar.

*A trapdoor opens in the center of the riffing chamber, and Ls’ head peeks through, scanning for anyone else.*

Okay, I think the orderlies have been distracted enough by that fight I started in the Cafeteria for me to be able to have a single riff on my terms, in my chamber, without Em’s “lock them all up together so I can have some peace and quiet” nonsense, or Bats trying to kidnap me, for that matter. It’s too bad Nurse Jimson and Brian had to have a falling out like they did, but hey, that’s life. 

Anyway, hello everyone, and welcome back to the Asylum and Wild at Heart; the fanfic where our favorite knockoff Poison Ivy Sue just got a useless Digimon (which might be related to the fic’s name) to accompany her in regurgitating the second season of ATLA. Our bingo board and counters are thusly:

Be Original!: 21

Sentenced. To. Death: 173 

Get… to… the… point!: 90

Readers

Yes?