Title: Kelly The Roman Warrior
Author: KingArthr2
Media: Literature (?)
Topic: Lord of the Rings/Twilight
Genre: Adventure/Fantasy
URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8181979/1/Kelly-The-Roman-Warrior
Critiqued by Linstar
Greetings! Once again, I, Linstar, have a riff for you. This time, it’s of an utterly bizarre trollfic. It’s a Lord of the Rings/Twilight crossover… or, at least, it claims to be. Did I mention that the spelling, punctuation, and grammar are incredibly horrible? Strap in, Lunatics. This one’s a doozy.
Oh. Yeah. See, everyone who visits the Asylum is a Lunatic, because the lunatics run the asylum. Get it?
*alarms whine*
Uh, what is this? It’d better not be the DRD again again…
*Pun Police arrive*
Seriously? You’re gonna arrest me for a little wordplay?
*Pun Police attempt to arrest me for a little wordplay*
All right, then!
[Scene redacted for extremely bad puns.]
*Looks around the room*
I’m alone? I guess they didn’t like my puns…
Anyway, on to the riff!
Continue reading “0008: Kelly The Roman Warrior – Chapters One and Two”