0300: Last of the Lost Part Two (Ls and Bookworm coriff)

Title: Last of the Lost
Author: The BefuddledBookworm
Topic: Lord of the Rings (and also Narnia, briefly)
Media: Book
Genre: Adventure, Romance
URL: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JEwZUZTnsUQ1eHgZk29QtLvU1d8c2dqAqpNtyEcxTRo/edit
Critiqued by TheBefuddledBookworm and Linstar.

Ls: Weeeelcome back to Last of the Lost, where we have more random Latin, plot speedrunning, and angst. With me again is Bookworm. 

Book: Hi! I might not be saying as much today. I’m finding this very hard to read.  

Editing Ls: Wow, our 300th post! That’s… almost a tenth of the Library’s backlog. Woo!

0292: Last of the Lost (Ls and Bookworm coriff) Part One

Title: Last of the Lost
Author: The BefuddledBookworm
Topic: Lord of the Rings
Media: Book
Genre: Adventure, Romance
URL: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JEwZUZTnsUQ1eHgZk29QtLvU1d8c2dqAqpNtyEcxTRo/edit
Critiqued by TheBefuddledBookworm and Linstar.

Ls: Hello everyone, and welcome back to the Asylum. I’m Linstar, and with me today is returning guest riffer TheBefuddledBookworm!

Book: Hi! I have written a few pieces of bad fanfic in the past, and I am now redeeming that with poking holes in this piece. More recently, I have been trying to write some better fanfic. 

Ls: Indeed. Today, we’re covering an old shame of Bookworm’s and it should be interesting to see how this goes. Let’s just say that it is indisputably better than even WaH, at least SPaG-wise.

0198: My Immoral (Oneshot)

Title: My Immoral

Author: Bloodyowl66/some other sockpuppet that has also been deleted

Topic: Harry Potter/My Immortal

Media: Fanfiction???

Genre: N/A

URL: N/A, has been deleted.

Critiqued by Linstar.

Yes, guys, this travesty is immoral.

Anyway, welcome back to the Asylum! I’m your riffer, Linstar, and I was doxxed in the last riff.

Or at least, someone attempted to do so. In fact, I am not a streaker, and had never even heard of my alleged IRL identity.

The reason this person did so was because of some really rather idiotic Reddit drama involving a fic they posted to the My Immortal subreddit; and as a result of me reporting them to Reddit for harassment, they deleted their account. Fortunately, I had already copied and pasted their posts (and a few comments), and so I have this ridiculous attempt at a fanfiction. (If you want to see for yourself, search “Myimmoral” or “bloodyowl666”.)

And, because of course, rather than a first chapter, I found a link to a defunct subreddit, because it was already deleted when I archived it. So we open with the second chapter.

0032: Judge Dredd, The Sameritan (an alterative and not so unhappy ending) (Oneshot)

Title: Judge Dredd, The Samaritan (an alternative and not so unhappy ending) 
Author: Estefan Garfield
Topic: Judge Dredd
Media: Comic
Genre: Drama & Sci-fi
URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13335311/1/Judge-Dredd-The-Samaritan-an-alternative-and-not-so-unhappy-ending (Dead link; URL seems has been recycled and applied to a random non-english fic, the actual story appears to have been deleted or the URL has changed since I downloaded it)
Critiqued by Crazy Minh

*Minh walks into her office wearing a red and black helmet that conceals her upper face, and a skin-tight one-piece jumpsuit coloured in a darkish blue. On her feet are a pair of green boots, tightly laced, and tipped with steel caps. Strapped to her left shoulder is a large golden pauldron vaguely resembling a tire sawn in half. On her right is a golden pauldron resembling an eagle. Chained to the left side of her chest is a gold badge with “Minh” engraved on it, and at her hip is a large sidearm with a needle-nosed barrel and a large semicircular dial at the rear. She also carries a rather large billy club with a titanium core, some handcuffs, and a small device marked ‘lie detector’ on her belt*

Merry Holidays, Citizens, this is the Law! Well, actually, it’s just me, your riffer for today, Crazy Minh. This will serve as a part of a brief intermission from Alien Regurgiation, which I’ll be getting back to after the new year. Anyway, today’s riff is from a new drokking canon, so prepare for an infodump, creeps!